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Caroline and Jose

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In the AT fandom, I've noticed many of the Mary-Sues/ Gary-Stu's are either humans, vampires, or werewolves. (Of course, there are plenty of wonderful OCs that fall into those categories, but that's besides the point)
Anyway, I created these two to see if I could make good OCs that fall under these categories. So here they are!

Caroline the Hippie Vampire
Caroline was a teen back in the '70s and lived with her hippie brother since she had been nine. (her parents had been arrested when they were younger for possession of marijuana) Her brother was killed when she was about 13, at a protest. (he was hit by a van)
Not having anywhere else to go, she joined a traveling group of other hippies, who drove around the country together like a big family. She loved hanging out with her new "family" and her previous bitterness over her brother's death was short-lived.
When she was 17, she found out her new "family" were all vampires. (turns out a majority of hippies had been) "Dad", the 'father' of their 'family', didn't panic at all, and allowed Caroline to join their league of vampire hippies. Since she didn't have anything against the idea, she agreed, and became a vampire.
Eventually, the age of the hippies and disco and what-not died out, and they all decided that they would be buried alive and wait to be 'awakened' at a time when the world needed them.(they were all buried by a fellow vampire, who thought the situation was hilarious)
Years and years and years later, Caroline decided she was a bit bored of waiting, so she came out of her coffin, only to find that her 'family' (who had been buried nearby) had disappeared. Not knowing what else to do, she decided to travel around this new land called "Ooo" and spread the messages of peace and love.
Caroline's a pretty mellow girl, a classic hippie most definitely.

Jose the Werewolf
Jose has no memory of his past; all he remembers is waking up in a straight jacket with no way out. He has no idea why the heck he's in it, and for some reason, nothing can get him out of it.
Though he desperately wants to get out, he is a bit scared of the reason he might have been put in the straight jacket.

But he swears he's not crazy.
He's a bit of a spaz, but mostly in an active running-around sort of way. He's not peppy or anything.

He's also up for adoption if anyone's interested. C: Just offer an amount of points, I'll let you know if I accept. (But I'd prefer something over 50 points.)

Let me know if you think they're too Mary-Sue-ish. Do you think I completed my mission?

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If Josie isn't sold can I have him in my story?